So, What's My Score?

I chose to assess my personal analysis paper; the one in which we compared ourselves to celebrities. I actually had a really hard time writing this paper. It was way harder than I thought it would be to find a celebrity that I was similar too. I would score my rough draft as a low. The first reason is that I didn't really ever tell a specific story, which was kind of the whole point of the essay. I really need to be more specific in my next draft in order to raise my score. The other reason I would classify my paper as low is that it was really choppy. Because I had such a hard time coming up with ideas whenever I got one I would just write it down, making for a very disjointed paper. That part will be easy enough to fix in my next draft because I have already thought of some better ideas. Overall, I need to find a more specific story connecting my celebrity and I to fulfill the requirements of the assignment.